英语怎么学,才能达到和母语一样的水平( 三 )


上栗子(应景一下,来个圣诞栗子):
我看到国外一个城市,描述圣诞活动的文字,大体意思是说:
2019年,在城市中心你会度过一个非常欢乐的圣诞节 。这里有一系列令人难以置信的活动,特别是我们的年度第二届深夜圣诞节 。深夜圣诞节,从12月19号晚上5点到8点,此时,市中心的街道面貌一新,有90个街头表演和超过150家商店将营业至深夜 。这是一个在充满活力气氛中,进行圣诞购物的美妙夜晚 。
根据这个意思,如果是一道翻译题,你可能会这么翻译,而且应该能拿到不错的分数:
It was certainly a very merry Christmas in the city centre in 2019. An incredible line-up of festive events took place at that time.Particularly,there was our second annual Late Night Christmas. On December 19 from 5-8pm, the Late Night Christmas transformed the streets of the city centre with 90 street performances and over 150 stores open late.All these made it a wonderful night to come in for Christmas shopping with a vibrant atmosphere.
读起来是不是也挺通顺的 。数一数,这一小段话,一共有5句英文构成 。然而,老外描述这个事情,其实只用了一句话,这一句话,就占了一段的内容:
It was certainly a very merry Christmas in the city centre in 2019 - with an incredible line-up of festive events taking place, particularly our second annual Late Night Christmas which transformed the streets of the city centre on December 19 from 5-8pm with 90 street performances and over 150 stores open late (see highlights below) making it a wonderful night to come in for Christmas shopping with a vibrant atmosphere.
是不是感觉挺神奇的,这么多的内容,居然用一句话就说清楚了 。虽然,你可能不能一下子,把五句话的内容放进一句话,但只要你有这个“堆积”的意识,你写出来的英文,就已经长的有点像母语的水平啦 。
“程咬金的三板斧”介绍完了,希望你的英语现在至少看上去已经又厉害了一点点 。


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